Pitch

Critical Need
Busia's poverty rate is 66% and literacy rate is 59%. I think with a better education we can provide these children with a better job. With a better job they can help their families live a better life with proper housing, enough food, clothing and providing more knowledge to them.
Some of these families are too poor to keep their children longer than grade 6, with my school families will be able to keep their child in school from grade 1-8.
Impact
These students that attend the school will show the world, just because you live in poverty does not mean you don't have the right to learn, to get an education and to fight for your dreams. I also think this will inspire other countries to provide more school for villages that can't support their children to go for schooling.
Feasibility

Desk- $47.88 x 160 = $7,660.8 Chalk- $0.99 x 160 = $15.84
Markers- $3.99 x 160 = $638.4 Paper ( white, line, construction) - 1,512
Crayons- $2.49 x 160 = $398.4 Ruler- $0.99 x 160 = $158.4

Contracting fees = $2,849,000
Architectural fees = $1,347,200
Building fees = $13,396,000
Architectural fees = $1,347,200
Building fees = $13,396,000
Total = $16,573,901.58
Last Points
- We are going to provide students with P.E and Sex Ed so they have knowledge of healthy living & more facts about Aids that affects their town.
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About Me
About Me
I'm Lorianna Belmar-Ramirez, 15 from Ontario. Currently attending Bill Crother's secondary school and looking to make a difference in the world.
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ReplyDeleteGood work!