in La Jugarreta,
Mexico
Pitch
This project means alot to me, It means alot to me because I think that it is important for kids to have a good strong education. It is important for everyone to be literate because then they will be able
to express themselves to others and listen and see how other people
express themselves. I feel that since everyone is equal in life that you
can't be treated the same if you can't fight for what you believe in
if you don't understand what is going on around you.
Critical Need
People in Mexico need to know the importance of Classrooms
becaue it will help them grab a better understanding of how
many people in Mexico don't actually know how to read or write.
People need to know this because then they could donate or help
build a Education Centre to help get everyone be able to read or write.
To get every single person in Mexico to be able to read and write,
because7% of adults can't read or write and 2% of children can't
read due to the lack of centres to teach at.
Impact
This project would benefit the world because it will allow the world's
literacy rate to go up and benefit free trade around the world do to
the amount of people that would understand how important it is.
This would not only help Mexico it would help Canada because we
need beer, cigarretes, and Automobile parts.
Feasibility
Timeline: January 2015 - Febuary 2016
Buisnesses: Staples, Home Depot
Providing for:
-To help support Young Children's Learning
-To Donate to a Good Cause
60x Pencils=$100
10x Erasers=$5
30 Chairs= $400
1x Building=$20,000
1x Chalk Board=$100
10x Boxes of Chalk=$75
Total Cost=$21,680
Last Points
-About 1% of Mexicans speack English.
-Mexico is the biggest spanish speaking country in the world
-Mexico is the second biggest supplier of Horsemeat in the world
-Ten times as many people die from scorpion stings then from Snake bites
-Mexico City produces enough sewage to fill an Olympic swimming pool every minute.
About Me
I am Curtis Baker. I am a student at Bill Crothers Secondary School.I am 15 years old. I play baseball. I also play hockey for the Georgina Blaze Minor Midget AA hockey team. I enjoy To listen to music. I live is Sutton, Ontario. My birthday is on November 18th.
"Helping Students from Rural Mexico Feel Comfortable in Your Classroom." Helping Students from Rural Mexico Feel Comfortable in Your Classroom. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 Nov. 2013.
"Mexico - Literacy Rate." Mexico. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 Nov. 2013.
46 Interesting Facts about Mexico. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 Nov. 2013.
I enjoyed reading your blog, i though the pitch was very good. You included many facts in the pitch and also stated why you feel this project is important to you. One thing you could work on is the Critical Need section. I feel as if you could add more detail and explain a bit more in this section. Your feasibility was very detailed and gave a very realistic idea of how much money this project would cost. There are some spelling errors, but not many. I enjoyed this blog, very good job!
ReplyDeleteThis blog has a good amount of information. You also provide accurate information about feasibility, which gives me a good idea of how much this project will cost. Your critical need could have some more detail to have a greater impact on the reader. Job well done.
ReplyDeleteI think you had lots of facts and I pretty good understanding of the topic. However, I think it could have been written better. You need to be a little more convincing in your pitch. Also, you have a couple of paragraph structure issues such as in your pitch there is a big gap in the second paragraph. Also, the bright red, underlined text is kind of distracting and hard to read. I think the blog is not quite there yet but if you were to fix up a couple things and add in some sentences more deeply explaining the topic and explaining the importance of literacy, then it would make your blog a lot better.
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